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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Shadowsong Grey Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:01 pm | |
| Name: Shadowsong Scarlet Grey (does not have any relation to Jean Grey)
Age: 16
Power: two sets of three adamantium-like claws (like Wolverine's but half an inch shorter) pyrokinesis (like Pyro but I can use the thermal energy in the air)
Occupation: N/A, high school student
Side: X-Men
Personality: Total Rebel, I love trying to prove that women are better than men and I can be very sweet when I want
Appearance: about five feet even with blonde hair that has a single pink streak, pale skin, hazel eyes that change to red when I'm about to use my pyrokinetic abilities and very skinny.
Bio: I am basically X-23 except for the fact that I was just born with an adamantium-like substance and I have all three claws in each of the two sets in my hands and that I wasn't cloned. No one knows where the pyrokinesis came from but I love it and it's saved my life a ton of times. I ran to the institute because my mother was very abusive though I have no proof thanks to my healing factor.
Family Tree: Sabretooth(father) (it just seems better than her father dying sorry If you want I'll change him. Plus he really seems like he'd leave a woman after even a week), Annabeth Rogers (mother), darcy Rogers (half-sister; dead), Reagan Rogers (step-father)
Stats:
Attack: 40 Stamina: 25 Control:40 Speed: 20 Intelligence: 25 Will: 22 Stealth:10 Persuasiveness: 40
Last edited by Shadowsong Grey on Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:10 pm; edited 4 times in total | |
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Kitty Pryde / Ororo Admin/Alpha/Resident Diva
Number of posts : 2074 Age : 29 Affliation : X-Men Location : Xavier Institute Causing trouble! Single or taken (rp wise) : Single. My prefrences are furry, blue, and with gold eyes Registration date : 2008-08-25
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:18 pm | |
| Alright. I would like to thank you for getting the stats correct, normally we spend the most time fixing that. However your bio leaves me wanting more. We have established that the cloning process that produced X-23 has been reused H.Y.D.R.A/AIM (depending on what continuity you're going by) and replicated by other organizations, so I have no problem with that; however, there are questions that need to be answered: Which organization made her and why? How did she develop both pyrokinesis and the claws? How was she born with an adamantium skeleington? How did she come to the X-men? | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:32 pm | |
| I kind of fixed it. And can I add like a family tree part? It would explain more on why she was born with adamantium. But for now, her father was another experiment for the Weapon X program. He died though after she was born and her mother is abusive. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:49 pm | |
| Once again, I know I'm breaking rule number six again but is she better? | |
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Kitty Pryde / Ororo Admin/Alpha/Resident Diva
Number of posts : 2074 Age : 29 Affliation : X-Men Location : Xavier Institute Causing trouble! Single or taken (rp wise) : Single. My prefrences are furry, blue, and with gold eyes Registration date : 2008-08-25
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:39 am | |
| It's okay since it's an OOC topic and you're not spamming, which is the main reason the rule exists. I think the family tree part will help clear things up. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:31 am | |
| okay i added that little bit | |
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Kitty Pryde / Ororo Admin/Alpha/Resident Diva
Number of posts : 2074 Age : 29 Affliation : X-Men Location : Xavier Institute Causing trouble! Single or taken (rp wise) : Single. My prefrences are furry, blue, and with gold eyes Registration date : 2008-08-25
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:36 am | |
| We're not picky about cannon relations, espically if it's in the case of abadonment like with Sabertooth. I would like a quick explanation on the Adamantium though. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:48 am | |
| Well I've been reading some rumors on the movies and one said that Sabretooth might have adamantium laced claws and adamantium bones. The rumor has yet to be proven wrong or right so I just thought it would make things more interesting with adamantium. | |
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Kitty Pryde / Ororo Admin/Alpha/Resident Diva
Number of posts : 2074 Age : 29 Affliation : X-Men Location : Xavier Institute Causing trouble! Single or taken (rp wise) : Single. My prefrences are furry, blue, and with gold eyes Registration date : 2008-08-25
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:32 pm | |
| Alright, I'm going to say approved unless Matt has anything to add next time he comes on. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:35 pm | |
| thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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Matt / Magneto Admin/Beta/Master of Formal Beat downs
Number of posts : 854 Age : 32 Affliation : Brotherhood Single or taken (rp wise) : Single Registration date : 2009-04-23
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:59 pm | |
| - Shadowsong Grey wrote:
- Well I've been reading some rumors on the movies and one said that Sabretooth might have adamantium laced claws and adamantium bones. The rumor has yet to be proven wrong or right so I just thought it would make things more interesting with adamantium.
This has happened, it's from the series of comics called Ultimate X-Men, it's an alternative time line from one this site is based on and was only possible due to the series giving the characters new backgrounds. The rumor is most likely fake and based off the comic. You couldn't have been born with the adamantium, the reason Sabretooth has it in this time line was due to his past being altered during his time with Weapon X. To be honest, I'm not a fan of X-23 but this might make a pretty good replacement. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:18 pm | |
| Well, sorry . I just found that bit and thought maybe the Sabretooth in this bit was the same as the one I read the rumor about. But I could always say her father was wolvie and the amnesia set in after he left her mother or that her mother was one of his one night stands. No that isn't rated M stuff. That there was even mentioned in a K+ story of X-men evo on fanfiction.net. | |
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Matt / Magneto Admin/Beta/Master of Formal Beat downs
Number of posts : 854 Age : 32 Affliation : Brotherhood Single or taken (rp wise) : Single Registration date : 2009-04-23
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:26 pm | |
| I'm not really against your character being Sabretooth's daughter, Sabretooth and Wolverine are related(how tends to vary) so you could still pick up the genes for being able to survive the Weapon X procedure, however your past would need to include it in some way. For this to work you would need to have the healing factor(something Logan and Creed share) passed onto you. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:45 pm | |
| True. Also that reminds me, they have it to wear (I think I got the name right) S.H.E.I.L.D. gave him the adamantium. Or at least so my cousin tells me. I missed that episode and she filled me in. But then again if Wolvie is her father I would have to do something like change her hair or something. I want it to be natural and her mother is supposed to be blonde. If Wolvie is her father, his hair color would be more dominant for her genes. So I guess I could make Stryker as a part of her history. Just like Daken and (supposedly) Erista (Wolverine's only known biological children) she would have a healing factor from Victor. The only reason her half-brother Grayden (only known in comics) doesn't is because, to the shock of his mother (mystique) he was full human. By the way, I checked the X-men wikia and marvel wikia for information. | |
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Matt / Magneto Admin/Beta/Master of Formal Beat downs
Number of posts : 854 Age : 32 Affliation : Brotherhood Single or taken (rp wise) : Single Registration date : 2009-04-23
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:59 pm | |
| You don't need to assume that you must take the dominant traits of your characters parents. It doesn't always happen like that in real life. Both parents may have dominant traits(dark hair and eyes) but if they carry recessive genes it's possible for them to have a child with blond hair and blue eyes.
Unless you want to say your character has an adamantium like skeleton as a part of your mutation, I don't think it would be a good idea to be naturally infused with it. This may very well play out better for you character as you would gain the strengths but since you character is not bonded with real adamantium you wouldn't be effected by people like magneto. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:04 pm | |
| thanks for the idea! Mind if I use it? And the recessive genes bit, forgot about that. Well actually I forced it out of my head. My cousin is a biology major and she is always yammering on about how I'm the result of recessive genes. | |
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Matt / Magneto Admin/Beta/Master of Formal Beat downs
Number of posts : 854 Age : 32 Affliation : Brotherhood Single or taken (rp wise) : Single Registration date : 2009-04-23
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:08 pm | |
| Go ahead, it would be rude to offer a solution and not allow you to use it, thank you for asking however. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:09 pm | |
| Well what do you expect from a Texas girl? I know it's not listed anywhere but I am. Of course I would ask. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:49 pm | |
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Matt / Magneto Admin/Beta/Master of Formal Beat downs
Number of posts : 854 Age : 32 Affliation : Brotherhood Single or taken (rp wise) : Single Registration date : 2009-04-23
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:54 pm | |
| I just changed your profiles power from adamantium claws to adamantium-like claws, everything looks fine. | |
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:59 pm | |
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Matt / Magneto Admin/Beta/Master of Formal Beat downs
Number of posts : 854 Age : 32 Affliation : Brotherhood Single or taken (rp wise) : Single Registration date : 2009-04-23
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Shadow Beta/Lupine
Number of posts : 598 Age : 30 Registration date : 2011-07-02
| Subject: Re: Shadowsong Grey Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:27 pm | |
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