Training session.(Damian/Open)

Matt turned into an old construction site, he looked at Damian.
"I don't know whats up with this place but I come here often and have never noticed anything change. I think the people who made this ran out of money for the project."

"Yeah I bet that what happened.." Damian waited for Matts first move as he stayed calm..

"I guess a spar makes sense, give us an idea of how to take things from there."
Matt took a deck of cards from his pocket and held it in his right hand, drawing a single card in his left as he waited for a reply.

"Why Not" Damian replied as He shot a gust of air to make the card fly out of his hand..

Matt was caught off guard as the card he was holding was blown from his hand.
"Not bad, but if you think about it now I have an idea of what you do, you could have used that kind of precession to take an early upper hand."
Matt decided to abandon the cards for this fight, starting off in a series of dashes around Damian to see if he couldn't keep him from aiming a proper attack.

Damian looked in confusion as Matt dashed around him Damian knew it be a risk if he used his wing yet he channeled all his might into flying to the Metal struckter of the construction site. Damian suddenly panting shot a gust of wind at Matt yet missing him imediatly.

(( MY SPELLING SUCK sory :) ))

Matt had no trouble keeping up, as Damian changed the location he was quick to take the opening and dashed in with a light strike to Damians right kidney before he stepped back and was back to moving around him, naturally using the unfinished building as a jungle gym.

Damian felt the blow hit him hard he was down in one shot. Yet Damian put up a good fight Damian hit the ground yet made a vortex in the unfinished building sucking Matt into it with no Oxygen.

Matt slipped from the sudden burst of air sucking him down, his reaction did manage him enough to grab onto the edge, not with chance of making a recovery from his position. As he was about to fall he kicked his feet up and pushed off the rail to project himself up but closer towards the middle of the vortex, using what air time he had gained he drew a card and tossed it at Damian in hopes of breaking his focus.

Damian soon saw a purple card fly out in the middle of no where it flew in the middle of the vortex as soon as it did it exploded and disrupted the vortex making Damian Fly back into a metal Rail.

Matt hit the ground landing on his back, as odd of a landing that it was he managed to roll into it a bit. He quickly stood up despite what pain he was feeling. as Damian hit the rail he tossed a card towards the sound.

Damian saw a purple light head toward him so he ran through thew dust in the air and Prepared for a explosion. Damian shot some wind uyet it didn't make a difference !

Matt decided to take to a long ranged barrage of cards as maintaining his close combat advantage was too hard and Damian was clearly better at mid-range. This would help improve his aim as well as force Damian to control his powers to either close the distance to adapt to the fight.

Damian flew in the air feeling the pain as soon as they held his weight ! A gust picked him up and He Moved the air with such swiftness that it picked up broken glass and rocks and pebbles and dirt to shoot at Matt. Damian Let out a sigh of pain as he landed at the to of the construction site. Damian shot more debris hoping to hit Matt and he heard it hit something cause he heard a gasp..

(I'd like you to think about a couple of things and try to rewrite that to fit a better fighting style for you.
first I don't understand what is going on with your character, he shouldn't be swift, when you take your speed against Matt, he should be getting overwhelmed.
He should be relying on his high attack to cause a large amount of damage with his intelligence and control to come up with some creative ways to use his powers and lead into the big attack.
The vortex for example was a great idea if you had used that later in the fight Matts high stamina would have been more drained and he might not have been able to react quick enough to recover, thus winning the spar.
Second don't lead on that Matt has been hit, that bunnying, him taking damage is something each player needs to decide by looking at our stats and thinking about how our characters would react at the time.)

Damian flew in the air feeling the pain as soon as they held his weight ! A gust picked him up and He Moved the air to that it picked up broken glass and rocks and pebbles and dirt to shoot at Matt. Damian Let out a sigh of pain as he landed at the to of the construction site. Damian shot more debris at Matt it hit something cause he heard a gasp.. He Shot a vortex with debris and other things towards the gasp Suddenly Damian fell from the lack of strength !

Damian / Multiple wrote:

Damian flew in the air feeling the pain as soon as they held his weight ! A gust picked him up and He Moved the air to that it picked up broken glass and rocks and pebbles and dirt to shoot at Matt. Damian Let out a sigh of pain as he landed at the to of the construction site. Damian shot more debris at Matt it hit something cause he heard a gasp.. He Shot a vortex with debris and other things towards the gasp(Matt) Suddenly Damian fell from the lack of strength !

This is what I wanted you to remove, the post is bunnying, something that I strongly detest.

I presume you're post is still the same, but in place of hearing Matt, why not just see him?

Check you Private Messaging I sent a Edited post before I would contenue !

Damian flew in the air feeling the pain as soon as they held his weight ! A gust picked him up and He Moved the air to that it picked up broken glass and rocks and pebbles and dirt to shoot at Matt. Damian Let out a sigh of pain as he landed at the to of the construction site. Damian shot more debris at Matt it hit something cause he heard a gasp.. He Shot a vortex with debris and other things towards the gasp Suddenly Damian fell from the lack of strength !



Edited


Damian flew in the air feeling the pain as soon as they held his weight ! A gust picked him up and He Moved the air to that it picked up broken glass and rocks and pebbles and dirt to shoot at Matt. Damian Let out a sigh of pain as he landed at the top of the construction site. Damian shot more debris at Matt as his aim was off from the pain in his wings and from the distance. Damian then Shot a vortex with debris and other things towards Matt Suddenly Damian fell from the lack of strength used in the vortex!


Trust me my grammar and speeling suck I am only in english too so it hard yet I am working on it I just need tips and pointers

AND THIS WAS SENT AUGUST 20 ! So I been waiting on a reply ! I Mainly followed your tip and edited that how section to fit a different criteria !

Ah... It was there, I missed it, my fault.
Unfortunately I have work in 10 so I'm not going to be getting starting with a reply today unless I get off early, since you've been waiting so long I just wanted to let you know i'll edit this post and send to a message when I'm finished.

OK ! THANK I can wait !

(alright, everything is back on track, things took a bit longer then expect but it turned out I had a bit more to do.)

Matt took notice as his current target took aim and shot a number of projectiles towards him, managing to roll aside and dodge to bulk of the damage.
"Damn that could have been really dangerous, who knows what you could have cut up."
Matt wiped himself off as he turned back to be lifted and twisted from the ground, landing in and extremely unfortunate manner as he smoked his head off the ground, quickly causing a large amount of bleeding. Still he quickly managed to stand up, despite this pain and damage that he has expected KOed him he was still able to fight.
"Wow, this is honestly the most damage I've taken and I could go at least one more round."
Matt stood up, a bit slower then normal, but his stance didn't betray him. He smiled for a second until he made his turn to see Damian, he started walking towards him hoping that nothing serous happened.
"You alright?"

Damian winced in pain yet let it subside.
Damian Looked At Matt and Answered " I'm Fine."
Then He got up !

"Alright cool man."
Matt wiped more of the blood that was getting in his eyes away and he turned towards the entrance of the site.
"Lets head out, I could keep sparing a bit more but my face hurts like hell."

"Ok" Damian Replyed
"Wanna get a Bite to eat after we clean you up."