lightingboy

Name: James Duke Armstrong

Age:16

Power:Absorption and manipulation of energy in the forum of light waves, this ability to absorb energy also grants him superhuman speed.

Occupation: none

Side: X-Men


Personality:most of the time he is very angery he is also very smart he's not realy funny nice once you get know him he's sometimes happy.

Appearance: 5'2 1\2 100 lbs black hair brown eyes brown skin

Bio: when James was two he got his powers 14 years later he's living with the x-men
were he has been happy living with them but when he found out that his parents need him to come home he did. they know there the ones that set him away the reason he is so angry is that a mutant from his own race of mutants called energy mutants killed his dagger master when he was to and because of his power they just dropped him at prof X's door he does not hate them but he does hate the fact that he has to deal with he's anger and not pand some skulls
energy mutants are a race of mutants from the middle ages the only person that clams him down is rogue maybe cause he likes her a lot because the people in he race can control light they can heal themselves he can also fly he's the king of his race

Stats:

two 50's and the rest 30 or below or three 40's and the rest 25 and below.

Attack:50
Stamina:24
Control:25
Speed:50
Intelligence: 25
Will:23
Stealth:20
Persuasiveness: 21

Please try to retype your application and use a paragraph form, then check over your work to ensure there is no mistakes.

lightingboy wrote:

Name: janes duke armstrong

Age:16

Power: can contorl and use light can not be harmed by rogue and no i'm not godmoding. can also take energy from tv's, compter,cars call phones etc has lead spikes. Run at light speed. See in the dark. contorl lighting thats were he got hes code name from.

Occupation: none

Side: X-Men


Personality: angery smart funny nice someimes happy

Appearnce: 5'2 1\2 100 lbs black hair brown eyes brown skin

Bio: when james was two he got his powers 14 years later he's liveing with the x-men
were he has been hapy living with theam but when he found out that his partens need him to come home he did. they know there the ones that set him away the reson he is so angery is that a mutant from his own race of mutants called energy mutants killed his dagger master when he was to and becuse of his power they just dropped him at prof x's door he does not hate theam but he does hate the fact that he has to deal with he's angery and not pand some skulls
enegry mutants are a race of mutants from the middle ages

Stats:

two 50's and the rest 30 or below or three 40's and the rest 25 and below.

Attack:50
Stanima:30
Control:29
Speed:99
Intelligence:39
Will:27
Stleath:20
Persuasiveness:21

What did I tell yo about the stats?!

i hope that you and him will get along

Matt and I? Or our characters?

my character and yours

"ah, I see" said the blind man.

Sorry! Had to post that! I get what you mean lightningboy.

yea see u in the halls surga

I fixed the majority of your spelling and your stats, please use a spell check, most of the words are not too far off, often the correct spelling was the first word recommended.
Wait until I get off work tomorrow I'll check over the grammar.

so am i in or not

Matt means, not yet capullo.

whats that mean

That you can't post because you havent been acepted and I dont want to tell you what capullo means

thinks man

i fixed it

Okay the bio's still a little shaky, with the whole other race of Mutants thing.

diffent power come from diffent races rogue is part of a diffent race of mutants to u know

https://xmenrise.rpg-board.net/t135-ranks-updates

Read up my friend. Rouge goes into the Beta category.

Okay I'm going to say approved for now, as you've been working on this all day. Just be prepared to be fixing things when Matt returns.

thanks kitty

No problem

I want you to fix the spelling errors for now, use Google to find yourself a spell check or start using Firefox that has one built into it.
I still think this is an iffy bio but it's a good start.